How To Write Dialogue Between Two Characters In A Story

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Dialogue, What It Is and What to Use It For

Dialogue is an essential part of any creative writing, such as novels, movies or plays. Dialogue can be used to tell the story, give character development, and create mood. It also helps readers feel like they are a part of the scene being described.

One way to use dialogue in storytelling is to make sure that it moves the story forward by revealing new information about a character or what has happened in the plot.

Dialogue can also be used for humor and for creating tension between two characters without directly stating it in narration.

Conflict and tension are essential in every scene of a story and dialogue between two characters can help to reveal conflict. A writer might use dialogue to tell the reader how two characters feel about each other.

This can be done by having the characters engage in conversations that reveal one character’s thoughts and feelings toward another character, if the dialogues are written well.

For example, a person might say something like “I don’t think I will ever trust you again” if they are angry with someone else.

Dialogue also can be used to create a mood in the story. A writer might describe how two characters are smiling or snarling as they speak, the sound of their voices, or another way to get readers to feel certain emotions.
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Who are these two characters?

Writing dialogue – know your characters

The nature of the dialogue between two people depends on what they want from each other. Are they friends, lovers or enemies?

The kind of dialogue they have depends on their relationship with each other:

  • Are they talking for the first time or for the thousandth time?
  • Are they laughing and telling jokes or are they screaming insults at each other?
  • Will the two people remain strangers or will they become friends?
  • Or maybe they will be enemies and try to kill each other?

Dialogue that maintains friendship helps readers feel they are a part of the scene, especially when the writer tells them which characters are speaking.

If the two characters have never met, then it is sometimes best to have their dialogue be short and to the point. If this is not possible due to length or some other reason than it is best for them to have a history with each other before they start talking.

What do they want in the dialogue?

What the character want from each other guides the conversation. Their own style of speaking affects the way they speak to each other.

Two characters might be having a serious conversation about a problem that threatens their relationship or the life of one of them. This is the time to have them say things directly, without prevarication or using humor. They are just trying to solve a problem, so they don’t have time for small talk.

However, if two characters are in love and one is telling the other how much they adore each other then humor is appropriate. In this case, the dialogues can be more lively and fun. The dialogues will also give readers clues about who is telling the humor to the other character.

Dialogue: How Do You Write It

What do characters want from each other?
How do you write dialogue between friends?

How do you write dialogue in a story?

There are two faces to writing dialogue – style and format. The style is character dependent and is guided by many factors, such as accent , social standing, and personality.

There are different style of dialogue for the main character than for secondary characters, and if the characters are speaking a foreign language, then the dialogue is different too.

Format is less variable. Normally,dialogue is enclosed in quotation marks, though in some situations it is not enclosed in quotation marks. It is always written in complete sentences.

“I don’t believe we’ve been introduced”, the bank manager said.

In some countries only one apostrophe is used:

‘I don’t believe we’ve been introduced’, the bank manager said.

In other countries a simple dash is used:

-I don’t believe we’ve been introduced, the bank manager said.

By far the most common convention is to use quotation marks.

How do you write dialogue in a narrative?

A narrative is another way of describing the prose use to tell a story or series of events, so it’s basically the same as story and dialogue is handled the same way.

How to write dialogue between two characters example

June turned around as Eric entered the room.
“Oh, I’m sorry”, he said, “I didn’t see you there.”
“That’s OK,” she replied, “I’m glad of the company.”

There are few guidelines for writing dialogue between two people. It needs to be clear who is speaking , which is normally done by using a name, or ‘he said’, ‘she said’.

There’s nothing wrong with ‘he said’ except that it can get a little repetitive if you’re not careful. Try to mix it up a bit, using the people’s names as well.

Actions can also be used to denote who speaks, for example:

“I’m really pleased to see you.” Jane gave him a knowing look and raised her skirt above her knee.

Dialogue That Gives Your Characters Personality

A character’s speech should be very distinctive, so that the reader can know who is speaking by the way the words are delivered.

A strong accent can be shown, or a speech impediment or habit. These all help the write to do away with adding too many speech directions such as ‘he said’.

What To Do When Writing Dialogue: Tips and Tricks

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How to interrupt someone when writing dialogue

Use dialogue to drive the story forward

Dialogue is one of the most powerful tools you have for drawing readers into your story. It does this in two ways. First, it gets your characters talking to each other. Talking sparks the imagination and gets readers involved in the story world. It also moves things along and keeps things interesting, because dialogue has a flow.

Action can be described using dialogue:

“My God, the railway station has just blown up!”

Dialogue in the mind – monologue

It’s quite possible to talk to oneself in a novel – we do it in real life all the time. This is called ‘monologue’ and it’s another powerful tool for fiction writers. You can use your hero’s monologue to reveal his thoughts as he or she works through a problem, or to get the readers involved in the story by getting them to wonder what will happen next.

When you’re writing dialogue between two characters keep in mind the fact that it should look like a real conversation. The characters should finish one another’s sentences, interrupt each other and so on.

How do you write dialogue between friends?

Dialogue between friends is less formal and is often sparse. Friend know each other’s language and sense of humour, or if they don’t know them well, they get to know them by the way they speak.

In dialogue between friends there is often lots of humour and teasing and both characters generally have similar personalities. This means that the dialogue doesn’t have to be descriptive.

Friends don’t have to explain themselves too much because they know each other well and they recognise each other’s inflections and styles of speaking.

How do you write dialogue between people who don’t know each other?

If you are writing dialogue between people who don’t know each other, both characters will be more formal and cautious in their speech. They may deliberately speak in a certain way to be polite. If they’re not sure of each other they will tend to stick to neutral subjects such as the weather, rather than personal issues or controversial topics.

Dialogue Between Enemies

Dialogue between enemies in a novel is often full of tension. Especially if the enemies are from different groups or nations. For example, diplomats talking after a war has ended.

Enemies also tend to have a lot to say about each other, which means that they will frequently interrupt each other and try to put the other person down.

In dialogue between enemies there is often far more description and much more explanation than there is in friendly conversations or formal conversations.

How to interrupt someone in dialogue?

An em-dash is used to show interrupted speech:

“What do you think you’re—”
“None of your business!” Joan cut him off.

How do you write thoughts in a story?

There are two common ways of writing thoughts:

Use a single inverted comma
Use italics

I find that italics get a bit tedious to read if there is a lot of text. The best way to show thoughts in writing is to keep them short.

Do you write thoughts in quotation marks?

You can do, but in my experience they should be kept as separate as possible so that the reader doesn’t get confused.

Do you write thoughts in italics?

Italics is my favorite way of showing thought, because it shows that the thoughts are not part of the spoken word.

How to write thoughts in a screenplay?

A movie script shows only things that an audience can see. Never try to write thoughts in your screenplay – it will be rejected.

The only exception is if the narrator is the main character thinking about the past and an actor is speaking the thoughts.